Ralt's critiques DNTM3 #04
Ralts023
Hello models, While this category seemed pretty simple and easy to execute and not make a mess, I see a couple of you struggled and I don't really understand why so good luck to everyone. Camell22 - I really enjoy the overall vibe that you went for, it being nighttime, the color of your fit being red and black, it's very nice. While I appreciate the posing, it's not flattering at all, we lose your face and it's not a "high fashion" pose at all, it's more of a casual after dunking some getting photographed incognito. ToriMarie - Out of all of the hanging on the rim ones, yours is I think the best one. The sky being just turned into nighttime complements your skin tone so well, the pose is very well executed and your face reads as soft. Pretty good in general. Goomybear - I'm no basketball professional but the proportions seems a bit off, the whole hoop being as big as his torso and the backrim being like twice his torso side idk it looks weird. The ambience is really flattering, the sun setting hits your face perfectly. The pose is original at least, nobody sat backwards showing us their back and still served face. Nike x Balenciaga campaign? Seong - Another weird proportion or angle photo cause why is he in the air holding onto the rim and so close to the ground at the same time? It looks like if he were to get up he'd be taller than all of it lol. The angle is the most interesting part of the photo but nothing about your outfit screams fashion, it's a dirty white lon sleeve shirt and some dirty socks. RobbieRiot - The physics of this photo is totally a MESS. The only part touching something is your thigh, the rest is floating there, it's such a weird choice, it looks suuuper AI. The outfit is cunty but the pose is a mess, the bent arm giving the ball is too heavy to being lifted, your face gives me nothing and also you made your model look like 15 years older than before. Idk if it's the makeover or what but this is veeery messy for what we're used to see from you. Thiii - Brazil! This is very subtle and very safe. There's nothing completely wrong with this picture which at least it's more than most this week, but also it's just too soft and subtle all around. The face, the pose, the outfit, everything is just safe. Honey - I like that you went for non athletic clothes for the shoot, but there's too much black on black on black that I can barely see the full outfit with her pose being so... Clumped? If she were like on her knees having her torso lifted up, everything would be clearer and it would have let you play with your face expression s but more. The lighting at least in your face looks good. Sam - Damn... This is goood. This is an ad for some athletic clothing line that we have already seen. Him spinning the ball is what really takes it that further step. This is for sure your "safest" pose so far but it looks cohesive and elegant, it looks like a literal ad. Hate the dirty shoes tho, some white people shit, some air forces that we've already seen. Body looks rights face looks right, wish a little bit closer to I didn't have to zoom in on it but I'll take it. Poof - The pose is very unflattering, he seems out of control of his legs, they are just opened, bent and all over the place, it doesn't look like all of it is intentional. I get that AI made your pit look weird but it's very distracting. What I do like is the outfit is nice, and how the sun hits him making him look sweaty but glossy at the same time. Cookie points for lucky number 23 ❤️ Dailyicon - I get that you felt like you had to take a risk but idk if this is the risk that needed to be made. It looks overall like a mess. This exact photo you take away the cheap fire effects and add a real background with some nice lighting and it's a contender for top photo, cause the outfit eats, your face expression is strong and you make your ball spinning as Sam's and yours probably would look better than his, but you went for a campy fire weird vibe that I'm not really understanding why. Lewis - WTF is this again? Lmao 🤣 You love a hit or miss photo and this one unfortunately for me, it's a miss even tho you look SNAAATCHED. The proportions of your legs look completely wrong, they're double your torso size. The facial expression while you tried something that could have worked, they don't look the same in the photo and the reflection, the angles are off. I don't really understand why the net had to be modified to that texture hahaha I'll give you cookie points for having a cute top with my lucky number 23 ❤️ Tisha - Meeeh I understand that you can't always go for a super dark vibe since it's predictable and you've done a couple times but I think it would have worked better here more than this being taken in such the middle of the day. Your legs look out of control and not creating very flattering lines. Your arms on the other hand do look very intentional and creating a good balance. From waist up it looks good, but waist down it looks messy. Cookie points for lucky number 23 ❤️ Tayvie - I can for sure see the vision you were going for, but the problem I'm having is the same as daily's, if you take out the camp element of the lighting and make it realistic, it actually raining it would look so much better, cause the water splash already creates a really effective effect to the photo. I would have like for the hoop to be higher so it doesn't seem that he could actually dunk without jumping basically. It's almost there, just more high fashion vision and less camp would have taken you higher. muribolt - I'm so excited for your new hair, this way you won't be able to hide your face. You went for the same vibe as Camell, but a little bit better executed, you are giving face while also being poured water after playing, it looks intentional and not like a friend was taking a pic after practice. You're the only female model that went for long pants and I appreciate that, it looks cool and not hyper sexual which is missing this season and specially you love serving sex most of the times. I wish the pants didn't blend in so much with it being so dark and the buildings in the back. bosslady - While I think this is a good photo and people will like it, on a personal level, I don't really enjoy it, it's too monochromatic and nothing this outfit is serving is giving me athletic. The pose and face are fine, but the overall vibe is ruined by that tacky outfit that isn't even part of the theme. A tiny bit of lighting in your would have been great as well we don't lose you so much. I'm so happy that last week is over, it was boring af. I feel like a lot of you have left the safe route which I enjoy, I remember last season having to close all of my critiques BEGGING the girls to give me something more than safe, and at least you aren't afraid to go for it and make it interesting, cause a lot of the bottom ranked photos with a few tweaks could get my #01 for sure. Also, please be careful with proportions and physics maybe it's just a me thing but most of them don't look right this week. Ranking #04 1. Sam 2. ToriMarie 3. Muribolt 4. Thiii 5. Camell22 6. Goomybear 7. Tisha 8. Honey 9. Seong 10. Tayvie 11. Dailyicon 12. Lewis 13. Poof 14. Bosslady 15. RobbieRIOT #DNTM3 Dimitra
