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Hey again! I had more time to comment on your shots. For the 3rd time, this is just how I felt and the judges comments matter the most so don't fight me. But I hope it can help you for future shots.
tezu - For the good parts, I love your look. The gown looks stunning on you and you look so pretty. Now, I do think your style of like a painting and pink-colored atmosphere is unique however from the brief, it said that the setting should reflect your chosen vegetable. Even though there are turnip accessories, I am missing more turnips in the background since it's full of flowers which could be a criticism from the judges IMO. You need to show your inspiration of your chosen vegetable from the setting too. BUT other than that, I like how you took this shot differently. It's very ethereal on the composition. But from the brief, maybe it needed more work on how you make it an editorial shot. Still, beautiful and elegant shot! I would post this at my home.
RobbieRIOT - I like how you make it different with having a flowy dress and you're more softer this time. The looking away actually works with the pose with movement that you're doing. Now, I do think the dress, even though the colors are green onion inspired (if I'm correct), it does felt underwhelming and safe. Also a leg is missing. For some gowns like the ones from honey and TommyXx are understandable because of their pose and tightness of their looks. But yours is free flowing so we need to show both your legs to see more of your posing. Also, the setting is also underwhelming. I am not saying to add a lot of the vegetable you chose, but to make us feel that it is the vegetable you're being inspired by. If there are more visibility on the vegetable, it would've been better for me. Other than that, I like your softness on this shot!
honey - I love your gown. Does it scream high fashion though? I'm not sure. It does feel more campaign or a commercial shot for gowns IMO, especially with the pose. However, I love how despite your edgy looks, we look into a more softer side of you which I respect and understand. Just make sure that if you're being different, it should fit your strongest features which is your face. Other than that, very ethereal shot as well, and you made the cauliflower evident that it strengthens your inspiration for the vegetable you've chosen. So overall, it's still a good shot!
TommyXx - My corn sister! haha. Your dress is unique in this. And you're one of a few that don't focus on having corn-inspired accessories but more on the color coordination, which works on this photo. I do think with the posing, I need to see more of your face cus the shadow from your arms blocks it. Or even your arm blocks the lower part of the face. The side pose is great and different from you though. The critique from last time is that you looked too seductive, but now even though you're showing more curves it still felt high fashion. I do think it's understandable for your other leg to not show for me with your pose. I know it's a corn field, and realistically, corns are not evident unless if they're harvested, so maybe try to add a bit more corn to make us feel you are inspired by the vegetable you've chosen. Other than that, great shot!
Lyanka - Positive comments first. I love how you finally took the judges critiques and you looked different now. It screams editorial magazine with this shot. The simplicity of the setting worked for me because at least you're holding a carrot and bit it in a fashion way and we're more drawn to your model's interaction with the chosen vegetable. However, the judges will definitely critique on not showing head to toe. I believe it was said a lot of times. I love how, just like TommyXx, your look is more on color coordination (well, except the hat, but I didn't mind too much). Make sure to show your look from head to toe. However, very simple but unique concept.
camell22 - I like your different take on this shot. Even though it looked like a vegetable I don't know, you're really trying to be inspired by it and that should be the main focus. Unfortunately, it still needed more work. Now, for the look, it does look more imitation than inspiration. Maybe you could've chosen a different look. Then, the foot was cut on the frame, so make sure to show head to toe. And it doesn't scream high fashion editorial to me. However, I like how you're also leaning to a more softer angle like honey. Unfortunately, the execution needed more work IMO.
lluckygc - I love your unique concept of being on a plate. The silky gown works well for this shot. The broccoli chest does add something unconventional to this shot, not sure though if it will confuse the judges on what it is made of, but I kinda get it. Still, I just like your concept here. You look so elegant too which I love, especially on your posing. Your face is very soft and elegant that it works on this shot. You are a veggie that they would eat upppp.
Zee_ - Zee, I like how simple your shot is and you look beautiful in this shot. I like your different take where I get you're not trying to look like the vegetable but use like thin or transparent fabric for its inspiration. However, just a minor comment. I said this to you before but I do prefer having the vegetable you're trying to be inspired on in your setting. Because the background does look more like a floral shot imo. Is it your best shot though? Not yet. I know you can do better based on your previous performance. But I like how beautiful and simple it looks because it works for me.
Torree - This is like a definition of ugly-pretty shot (in a good way). The spikes on your look and hair added a unique concept to your look that is unconventional in a good way. It's very campy and avant garde. However, I'm sooo sorry to say this, but if the brief is different I think it would've add more points for me. I love your look so much, believe me. I just felt like you're trying to imitate a cactus and it camouflaged in the setting on the lower half of your shot rather than having a look that could be more on the inspiration side. That's just me though, it could be different from the judges (I do hope I'm wrong, cus I love this look. I'm just basing on my understanding with the brief). However, it's very editorial and I love the composition in your shot, I can still see this in a magazine.
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