Ralt's critiques DNTM3 #05

Hello models, What an upgrade this week for most of you, y'all are going to make it hard to make me say nasty things. Hard but not impossible tho. Tisha - If this were a normal week I'd say STOP THE COUNT, we have a winner this week. The make up is 10/10, I looove how it looks on you. My only critique is even tho your face has flesh, I wish I could see more skeleton from such a close photo. Your skin looks like porcelain tho ugh obssesed with it. Bosslady - One of the weaker ones for me this week, I think not looking directly into the camera a week where it's just close up it's a risk and in your case it's a miss. I'm missing a stronger eye shadow choice as well, it looks too bare. Seong - I kind of got tired of looking at the same sad/crying face with smudge make up but I think that you were the coolest of them all, the red make up making it look like the red when you cry is such a smart choice to make. I understand that the fabric had to be seen and if it didn't cover your mouth, you could've gotten read for it but I don't like how it covers the mouth area. Poof - This is one of many smudge make up crying, very in the middle for me. The blue veil choice with your eyes is very flattering, the best choice of the photo. I wish it was more original. Honey - I looove the lighting in this picture and I appreciate that you didn't go for the messy vibe and went a more soft route. For a close up having have of your face covered by your hair is not a really smart choice tho... Little make up works here, but I would've appreciated a bit more for the eyes to tie the color of the veil more. In general lines it is a very appealing photo to look at tho. Torimarie - I love that it isn't too mathcy matchy, every blue/purple is different and it complements the others. The hair is giving a little bit of greasy hair from not showering tho hahaha Muribolt - The veil not touching her and just being there to frame your face is kind of lazy, and it cuts your chin making your face shaped look weird. The make up is way too soft but I do love the freckles. Sam - I saw this inspiration photo while diving in pinterest :P The story is very simple and can be understanded but the photo for sure need a bit more lighting so we don't lose so much of your eyes, they blend in a little too much for my liking. dailyicon - Another smudge makeup crying. I do like the touch of having him drooling from crying, it's a nice detail to make it more believable, but the rest isn't giving me much and the color combo doesn't completly add anything to the photo. Camell22 - This photo could've been very good since the lighting is sooo good but the rest is an almost. The veil looks too AI or just a filter added on the photo, it doesn't even look like fabric to me. The eyes are waaaay too bright, very "edited" looking for a closeup. Also no make up at all is a nope for this photoshoot. Goomybear - Even tho smudgy make up it looks intentional and dramatic. I thought we would see more water photos this week, it was my first thought when I read it, it adds editorial and dramatism to the photo. I hate how the veil looks like a cheap piece of fabric just added cause of the theme, no interaction with the model at all. Thiii - This eats. While little to no makeup, with the gold and lighting it works wonders. The fabric seems expensive and make her look even more luxurious. The subtle angle is a yes for me as well. A tiny bit of more make up and it would be my number one this week. RobbieRiot - This looks EXPENSIVE. The lighting is looovely but I think it's important to have a visual contact with the camera in a close up photo, I also feel like I'm seeing a little too much of you rather than a full close up. The greens work so well together, Im obssesed, I'm mad you chose not to look at the camera. Lewis - Another miss this week. The make up looks very messy and the angle you chose for the model to be looking at the camera is so unflattering, with those dark eyes it almost looks like your eyes are closed and giving strong face was mandatory this week. With all of this being said, I did really enjoy the majority of the photos. Keep it up, not many duds left in the competition and next week it's week 6 so I wanna start to see some front runners cause the first front runners have been struggling a little bit, it's anyones game. Ranking #05 1. Tisha 2. Thiii 3. Seong 4. Honey 5. Goomybear 6. Sam 7. Poof 8. RobbieRIOT 9. ToriMarie 10. Camell22 11. Dailyicon 12. Bosslady 13. Muribolt 14. Lewis #DNTM3 Dimitra